Friday, 13 February 2015

Reader Response Draft 2

In ‘Who is the true enemy of internet freedom: China, Russia or the US?, Morozov (2015) urges the readers to take notice of the US’ slyly aggressive stance regarding technological sovereignty vis-à-vis China and Russia’s overtly aggressive outlook on the same. This article covers several pertinent issues that would not have reached the public sphere without a certain level of investigation. The United States of America is the country most often associated with freedom and human rights. We often perceive it to be a place where every man is heard and every woe is solved. While China and Russia are vocal about controlling cyber data of their citizens, the US is indeed a silent player in the same game.

By recording and observing the actions of the US government, its hypocrisy in the matter of privacy becomes clear. US run companies accuse and take actions against countries like Brazil and Russia for violating basic user data privacy. Google shut down operations in Moscow after a law to store all Russian user data only on national servers was passed. At the same time, the US demands full control over private data of users of all US run companies, regardless of where data is stored. Hence, it is clear that the US contradicts itself in its demands and actions. Recently, when the US Department of Commerce announced that it would be relinquishing its control over the domain name system to the rest of the world, Republicans reacted with hostility (Maher, 2014). The mere fact that the US thinks it controls the global web space to begin with aptly describes how it views the issue of technological sovereignty. 

Blinded by its aim to extend its control, the American government often overlooks how its actions affect those under its direct grip- the tech giants of the Silicon Valley (Morozov, 2015). Even if these companies do not comply with their government’s demands, other countries view them as governmental pawns, thus compromising their businesses. This could have detrimental impacts on the US economy and every inter dependency it has with other countries. Politics muddled with business is never a good combination, and this case is no exception.

Russia and China are perceived as having controlling governments; a prime reason for mistaking their actions for censorship. The author defends this common misconception as a response to how the US treats freedom. If the US were to be granted access to cyber data of all US-owned companies, irrespective of country of storage, it would be a huge breach of privacy and basic trust. Why is it then that the actions of the former are seen as censoring, but not the actions of the ‘all mighty’ USA? 

To answer to this question, we must go retrace our steps, all the way back to World War I. During the third year of the war, the Allied powers became hugely dependent on America for grain, oil and fleet purchases (Frum, 2014). Britain paid for these investments by floating increasingly larger bond issues in dollars, instead of in their own currency. As a result, America became an economic superpower, suppressing, instead of joining, its imperial rivalries. 

At present, the 'developing' economies, like China and India, pose a threat to America's economic status. However, it will take a lot more to challenge American ego-centrism than economic change. It is a mindset that must be altered, a theme that must be changed. For countries attempting to escape the tight hold of the West in cyberspace, it is just the beginning of a long journey to independence. 

(592 words)

Works Cited

Forbes . (2014, March 15). US Government Cedes Control Of The Internet. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/emmawoollacott/2014/03/15/us-government-cedes-control-of-the-internet/
Frum, D. (2014, December 24). The Real Story of How America Became an Economic Superpower. Retrieved from http://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2014/12/the-real-story-of-how-america-became-an-economic-superpower/384034/
Maher, K. (2014, March 19). Politico Magazine. Retrieved from http://www.politico.com/magazine/story/2014/03/control-of-the-internet-104830.html


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  2. This reader response has great potential, Naina, thanks to the way you have connected the theme of Morozov's article to America's economic development since WWII and its current position. However, I'm not sure of your thesis/main claim. One issue that convolutes this issue is your summary and the way that you relate the ideas of Morozov. Toward the end of paragraph #1, it isn't clear whose ideas are whose. Part of the problem is the conversational use of "we," which makes it seems as if this is your take.

    At the start of paragraph #2, there is what appears to be a claim, that the US government's actions toward "privacy" seem to be "hypocritical." That idea needs to be narrowed to a specific type of privacy in order to connect better to the Morozov article. It also needs to be focused upon in a more deliberate fashion throughout the article, with more obvious detailed supports, if it is your thesis. What in fact happens is that you bring in lots of interesting but perhaps less relevant info about post-World War II American economic development. The problem is that you veer away from the issue of cyber security in the process.

    Other issues include:

    --- In the first paragraph, you write as follows: "We often perceive it to be a place where every man is heard and every woe is solved." Is this your idea or Morozov's? Do you why this in't clear? Also, could this idea be expressed with using "we"?

    --- By recording and observing the actions of the US government, its hypocrisy in the matter of privacy becomes clear. >>> Who is recording and observing? That isn't clear in this sentence.

    --- In the second paragraph, you use the word "hence". Is it needed?

    --- There's lots of info in paragraph #2. Where does that come from? It needs to be cited.

    --- Your reference list does NOT adhere to APA style guidelines.

    And most importantly, what is your thesis here? That needs to be made much more apparent. Any thesis then would need to be supported very specifically.

    I look forward to your next draft, Naina.

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